Thursday, November 17, 2011

a poetry unit.
Well I JUST FLAT OUT HAT POETRY I THINK THAT IT IS A Today we began WAST IF SCHOOL TIME.POETRY IS BASIKLY JUST A WAY TO TELL SOME HAW YOU THINK OR FEAI ABOUT SOME THINK ABOUT SOME THING BUT IT IS TIPED IN A DIFRENT WHAY TO MAKE IY LOOK FANSY AND COOL AND ELIGENT AND IT IS SAID IN A RIME . I THINK THAT IT IS JUST PHOOY BUT A LOT OF OTHER PEOPLE THINK THATUT IS A GRAT THING BUT THAT IS JUST THEIR OPIAN MIN IS VARY DIFRENT
We read Love That Dog by Sharon Creech
Pause #1:This is most be a young boy finding him self in poetry thinks that he dose not know that he is very good in poetry but he is hiding it in side but very slowly opining up about doing poetry
Pause #2: like I said I think that he is scared that other people will not like his work that they will disapprove it
Pause #3: he is changing his mind about all the things that he started off with he is rally reaching out to his poetry
Pause #4: he is terming in to a poet but he is still trying to fight his hidden talents but all the time that he is hiding his talent he is riley just putting it in his poetry he is just letting it go just a little bit at a time but he is still letting it go even thou he is letting it go slow he is still letting it go
Pause #5: he is starting to love the poetry with all the thing that have been thou he is just letting all of it in his writing that is the reason that all of the things that he has been putting in his writing are getting sad and omoshinal he is riley getting in to his work
Pause#6: the thing that he is right knows he is putting inure the things that he is riley feeling the thing that he is putting it in his writing
End: he is writing the thing that he means when he is writing he is riley getting in to he mood of the way that he wanted it to be he is just letting is all go he is just going with the flow he is turning in to a true poet and he is not rejecting it at all  he is letting his true self out


Jake got his inspiration from: his dog sky, a fames poet and all the thing that are around him self and all the things that are important to him nomater the omoshinal toile on him he just lets it all out no more hiding
MY POETRY
BECOUSE
Because the Earth spins round it makes me dizzy
Because the Earth spins round
Because the wind is high it boles my mind
Because the wind is high
Because the sky is blue it makes me cry
Because the sky is blue


By Zebrafish15

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